children
today on the bus
a man in his fifties
smiled at a baby
while i wiggled my finger
at a dog
who stared with perked ears
over the shoulder
of a discontented owner.
a man in his fifties
smiled at a baby
while i wiggled my finger
at a dog
who stared with perked ears
over the shoulder
of a discontented owner.
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A tiny slice of bus life. Perfectly interpreted. :)
I love parallels like this. Cool and effective piece.
How to write one heck of a story with just two images! *