So do you read my writing?
I text you
I need to know what
you like better
The blood
or the guts
That's what it is.
You see I
put it out there
for you.
That's not what it says
but I know the truth.
Am I smart enough
good enough
do you think it's crap
because anyone can like it but
you're the only one who matters.
I imagine your impressions as
I put it down.
Predict your criticism
crave your praise.
How to tell the story
in a way
you will understand.
There's more to me.
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We all have that person.
the title itself deserves all-honesty-honest-nothing higher in my book *
(I like the way it reads with no period after "you will understand," flowing into/with the last line.)
This is courageous! Yes. But write for you too, but you know that, and that makes me sound as if I know something. I don’t.