Fossil Beach

That last line!

Oh! Especially this:
"gar bones are strewn on the shore
something to treasure later, as I gather them

to work into another dream"
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This reads better and better. Great stuff.

I like this

Beautiful movement. From swinging back and forth to a vortex, this captures like a pendulum. (Had to look up gar bones. Something new.)

Lovely. *

This is sweet and, like the others, I especially like the gar bones line. For me, the second line detracts from the piece. *

Yes, the last 3 lines especially *

***, Kitty.

Love this: "the grandmother tree, roots reach out, whispering"

Lovely, visual *

Big yes to the ending. Good read.

Very fine poem.
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Thank you Matt, Rachna, Jill, Gary, Dianne, Charlotte, Ray, David, Frankie, Loren, Sam and Bill. Appreciate you taking the time to read and comment, and for letting me take you all to Fossil Beach.

I like the title and the "gar bones".

Thank you, Erika.