by Kirsty Logan
expect nothing she
hails from blood running in her
streets the other hand of the thief
low illegal shapings
fifteen together
with a little streetart slamtrick
expect nothing but
skate park thump music
more chicks by the
time you read this I'll
already be gone
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NaPoWriMo, Day 26.
I really like the music here, Kirsty. Relentless, all the way through. Great piece.
i like this:
streetart slamtrick
this:
fifteen together
and the way this poem vanishes,
already gone
erasing itself.
The whole thing feels like a slight-of-hand. Enjoyed.
I've been re-reading this off and on for a couple of hours. It's so simple, but not at all. I really enjoyed it.