Sunrises and Borrowed Pages
by Karen Eileen Sikola
I'm sitting on the B-line toward Park, and there is a woman with the same black bob as Mad TV's Miss Swan, and she is leaning the whole front of her body against the whole pole in front of me, and even though there is plenty of space around her, she is pressed up against it as if she is being pushed, and her mid-section is folding around my knee-cap like a catcher's mitt, and when I transfer to the Red Line, I feel relieved, until a lady smelling of mustard sits next to me, and I hold my breath until Central because she is making me crave pastrami, a peppered flesh I have gone nearly five years without consuming. And the next morning, on the first train of the day, I feel chilled as I watch the sun rise up over the Charles, and I almost miss the odd intimacy of that woman's gut, and I smell nothing but the borrowed pages being turned in my hands.
I've sat next to all of these people. Love all the sensual details here.
Wow. Another amazing piece. Very magical how you achieve the effect. The last phrase is awesome.
I had to read this because you started it off with one of my T riding pet peeves and that is someone doing the pole lean (especially on a crowded train). The writing is nice too.
This could be a poem, but I'm glad it's not. I'm glad you put it here for us to read.
Jeffrey's right on the perfectly turned phrase at the finish.
Thanks so much, James!
Fantastic use of sensory images. Not too long, not to short--just right.
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