by John Olson
I am building an elevator of sticks and compliments.
It will be lifted by groans of sorrow and ecstasy.
Strange music will emanate from its walls. Emphatic
smells of sweet oblivion will burst from its nimble
chains. It will dribble brains and museums during
its ascent and flicker benedictions and elbows
on its descent. Its shadow will weigh many tons,
but the elevator itself will weigh nothing. Deviations
of milk will flow through its forest. Gargoyles will purge
its interior of anguish and insults. There will be no panic
or hunting or investment opportunities. There will be only
dereliction and books and anonymity. Of course
no one can control what goes on in an elevator.
Particularly an elevator with such enchanting properties.
And although this elevator will only have an existence on paper,
it will cross the blood brain barrier like a stupendous drug
and create a fresh new appraisal of cranberry. Why
cranberry? Why not cranberry? I am building an elevator
of sticks and compliments. It will be lifted
by cranberry. And its music will be the music
of the cranberry. And its purport and essence
will be that of the heartwood. It will hiss with fire.
It will seethe with desire. It will exist as a thought
and hang from a long thin wire.
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Sure would like to see work like this in shorter-line layout. Seems like the images would "get their due," so to speak, presented in a more singular fashion.
I completely agree with Mr. D. There are such jewels here wedged amongst the text.
Ok. I'll give it a shot.
Good going so far (if you'd like single spaces, use Shift/Enter at same time instead of the usual Enter, which for some reason always appears as a double space).
Wonderful last stanza. I'’d like to ride this sucker a few floors.
"Deviations of milk"
Good phrase.