by JM Prescott
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One of those poignant and connecting moments, that seem to transcend the ether. Well captured -Karen
"poignant" is probably the best word i can find. i've always had a fondness for any sort of artifact, anything that connects me to something that has passed. this was a personal, bittersweet conveyance of that. enjoyed. - Jared
A flash in six sentences.
Yes, quite poignant. Well done! I had a friend pass away last year and I have those moments when I come across something that once belonged to him or was given as a gift.
Did you submit this to Six Sentences? You should. Or better yet, Opium magazine is having a contest for seven sentence stories. I think you could squeeze another line in this story, yea? Cash prize involved.
Poignant and powerful. Well done!
Think a typo: fourth or fifth... not of
Very strong piece! I first saw this at Like Birds Lit and it left a lasting impression…
I love pieces like this. Such a seemingly insignificant event - like using a rebate as a bookmark - has such a significant event on someone else....