by Jerry Schatz
He glanced at his watch, frowned, shook it, held it to his ear, then sighed — a look of exasperation clouding his face.
A woman behind him observed his actions.
“Not working?”
Her voice startled him. “What?”
“Your watch — not working?”
He stared at her for a moment. “No. Not working.”
“We've been here for so long.” Apparently she wanted to talk.
His lips narrowed to a thin line. “Yes, a long time.”
He looked away from her.
She persisted. “How long have we been here?”
A note of anger crept into his voice. “How long? How long? Why …, why ….” He swallowed hard, realized he had forgotten.
“Why … I don't know.”
“How long have we been here?” the woman asked again, her voice rising in petulance.
He glanced at his watch, frowned, shook it, held it to his ear, then sighed — a look of exasperation clouding his face.
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I wrote this while a member of Pam Casto's Flash Fiction Workshop. Pam and other members of the workshop made suggestions about improving clarity which I've incorporated.
excellent! *
Bobbi, thanks for your word [grin] on The Queue, and thanks for the fave!