"I'm sorry," the clerk says. "We need your real name for the reservation."
I scowl at her through an opioid haze. "Armitage Shanks is my real name."
The clerk snickers. "Your mum must have really wanted you to be pissed on from cradle to grave, eh?"
"Do you know who you're talking to?" I say, lisping the initial consonant through my missing top incisors.
I'm sure she thinks she knows who she's talking to. She thinks she's talking to a skid row tramp. My costume doesn't help dispel her first impression of me. I'm wearing sweat pants and a T-shirt with a lurid cartoon of a dinosaur on it, under a dirty wool leisure suit that I hastily liberated from a corpse I found reposing behind a rubbish bin in the alley behind the hotel not half an hour ago.
I must certainly smell like a battle trench.
I straighten up my spine, and I rock back on my heels to rebuke her in the firmest voice I can muster despite my somnolence. "I am Armitage Tiberius Shanks, Imperator of Antarctica and Protector of Australia and New Zealand," I bellow at her, "and I don't need a reservation."
The clerk looks bemused. "This is the Mount Olympus Hyatt Regency, and I can assure you Mr. Shanks, even Zeus himself would need a reservation on New Years Eve at this property, but let me look to see if we have any cancellations in the computer."
"I'll cancel the whole lot of you if—" I hiss, but I'm interrupted by a manager bot tugging on the clerk's sleeve and pulling her aside to whisper.
Finally. Now, I'm getting somewhere.
After a moment, the manager punches a few keys on the clerk's computer and steps back. She smiles at me. Perfect teeth. Well-tended hair. Make-up applied precisely according to corporate protocol. "I have a suite on the mezzanine level," she says. "I'll need a major credit card."
I take out my fountain pen and snatch a pad of note paper off the clerk's work surface. I sketch out by hand a nearly perfect drawing of a Mastercard issued by the Bank of Antarctica. The name reads ARMITAGE SHANKS. I tear the sheet of paper off the pad and hand it to the clerk. She looks to be struck dumb for a beat, then she turns to the manager bot, who wiggles his forefinger back and forth and purses his lips.
The clerk takes the paper and types the number off the front into her computer. Hamster wheels turn, and the clerk gives me a nervous smile. I grin back at her, making sure to stick the tip of my tongue through the space where my incisors used to be. She looks back at her computer.
"Mr. Shanks," she brightens. "You'll be in room 399. That's on the third floor. The elevators are behind the fountain—"
"I know where it is," I say, snatching the plastic key-card out of her hand. "Have room service send me a new suit and a dentist, first thing in the morning. I'm going to bed. Don't wake me up before ten o'clock."
"Yes, sir. We'll be happy to do all that for you."
"Remember," I point my finger right at her nose. "Not before ten o'clock. There will be nine hells to pay if I don't get some sleep soon."
The manager bot taps his earphone and walks to his desk behind the counter with the drawing of the Mastercard I produced. The clerk smiles at me.
"We're happy to have you staying with us, Mr. Shanks."
Not as happy as me. Not nearly as happy as me.
Grmf. Okay, the first draft is too long for flash fiction.
I like this. It feels like part of a longer piece which I would very much like to read. I can't believe I had forgotten all about Armitage. Off to the Usenet archive I go....
Most flash publishers whose submission guidelines I've read define it as anything under 1,000 words. If you agree with them, then this fits.
I've got another Armitage Shanks piece kicking around in my LJ archive, in which I grouse piteously about the problem of writer's block.
"I must certainly smell like a battle trench." Got to be one of my favorite lines, ever.
Why, thank you Mr. Rombes. I'm glad you liked it.
nice, reminds me of a George MacDonald Fraser style, good fun
Thanks, Gabriel. And now I'm off to find out who is George MacDonald Fraser. (I am *so* ignorant.)
Loved the credit card drawing. I used to know a guy who could draw a perfect can of Bud on a moving barrel.
Nice. I like this guy.
Thanks Larry,
In this piece, I was inspired by the stories of two real-life artists: Joshua Abraham Norton and JSG Boggs, both of whom have reasonable Wikipedia entries.
The character tends to change from story to story, as I write them.
I would like to meet this guy :-)