Take One:
Sometime in the 60s a philosophy teacher named William H. Gass was writing a novel. He had it about where he wanted it when someone stole the manuscript from his car. He re-wrote the novel, adding one new outsized character named Jethro, and published it under the title Omensetter's Luck. Some guy reviewed the new novel in a respected national magazine, called it the most important novel of this half-century, and made reference in the review to Joyce, Proust, people like that. There were, let us say, expectations. Gass followed up with a collection of short stories called In the Heart of the Heart of the Country, which included a longish story called "The Pedersen Kid," a story which he'd had a hell of a time getting published (John Gardner finally published it in a small magazine called MSS, now defunct) and which Raymond Carver, who you've heard of, couldn't make any sense of when he was learning the trade with Gardner. (Gardner told him to read it again. As near as I can tell, Ray didn't. Didn't hurt him.) Gass then began writing a novel called The Tunnel. From time to time pieces of the new novel would appear in literary magazines, sometimes accompanied by essays in which Gass delivered himself of rather chesty literary pronouncements. Years passed. He kept working on the novel. Meanwhile, his essays kept appearing, mostly in The New York Review of Books and The New York Times Book Review, and some other places. These essays were collected and published by his publisher, David Godine, in three volumes. Two of these three collections had the word 'WORD' in them. There was another book which might have had the word 'WORD' in it, but didn't. This one was called On Being Blue; it also had to do with language and style. There was an "experimental" novella in 1972 called Willie Masters' Lonesome Wife, which had some pictures of a naked woman in it, and seemed to be an outworking of Gass' literary theories. Some, notably John Gardner, took exception to it, not because of the pictures of the naked woman, but because Gass (Gardner thought) seemed to think that words and sentences both created and inhabited a fictive world, an aesthetic space beyond good and evil. Gass talked a lot about how he meant 'word woman,' not real woman. Gardner countered with a book called On Moral Fiction, in which he talked about Tolstoy a lot. There was debate in the land; doctoral dissertations were launched. Gass kept writing the novel, with Gardner and others commenting on the pieces that had already appeared. Somewhere in here Gass' name got tossed around with some others, including John Barth and Donald Barthelme; the word 'postmodern' was frequently employed. Nobody seemed to like the word much, at least no one who was actually writing fiction; there were many disclaimers. Barthelme remarked as how it was difficult to slap a saddle on this rough beast, "postmodern." Barth mailed many small white postcards to Gass with his thoughts on this and other issues (these can be seen among Gass's collected papers at the Washington University library, in St. Louis). Barthelme and Gass appeared together, with some other writers, on a panel once; Ann Beattie was in the audience, frowning at Gass. (Gass made a point of mentioning this to me in an interview I did with him a few years back. This was some time after one so-called critic of minimalism, in what sounded like a self-parody, famously complained about minimalism and "all these Ann's that seem to be writing fiction nowadays.") This was still the 1970s, which seemed to last as long as this paragraph. By this time Carver had come out with his first collection, Will You Please Be Quiet, Please?, and later Ann Beattie, Mary Robison, Frederick Barthelme and others were publishing, and the word 'minimalist' started showing up with greater frequency, generating more heat. Jump: We're in the late 80s now. Gass fired off a New York Times piece which attacked the minimalist thing, and named, among others, Frederick Barthelme. Barthelme published a response of sorts, a cri de coeur with an irresistible seek-the-surface lightness (no easy task) and a Veronica Geng-inspired title: "Convicted Minimalist Spills Bean." These were high times. People like Tom Wolfe were telling writers to write real fiction (translation: write like me). T.C. Boyle was simultaneously writing densely plotted novels with nineteenth century poundage and going slick, (causing Gass, who had written a gushing blurb for Boyle's first novel, to blush and reconsider). You could go to a writer's conference at a place like Antioch College and hear genre writers mispronounce the name Barthelme, mock minimalism, plead for plot. Meanwhile, Gass kept writing his novel, which finally appeared in late February of this year, published by Knopf. It's his second novel, written across four decades.
Most of the preceding paragraph is true.
Take Two:
Having completed his magnum opus, Guilt & Innocence in Hitler's Germany, William Frederick Kohler, distinguished Professor of History at a distinguished Indiana university, sits in his chair, intending to write an Introduction. Blocked, he writes instead a history of history, or better, a history of the historian-as- liar, lout and loser. Fearing his wife will discover it, he hides the new manuscript by slipping it into the pages of his book. Meanwhile, he begins digging a tunnel out from the basement of his house.
So much for plot. But Gass's readers, who have waited nearly thirty years for this new novel, have never worried much about plot, nor about character, in the traditional sense. He is NOT a nice man, this Kohler, only more so. His mother was a gin- besotted drunk, his father a verbally abusive bigot.(So much for How He Got That Way.) He speaks with the volume turned up. He lies like a rug, has anxieties aplenty, and his sins are not small. He gives new meaning to the hackneyed literary phrase "unreliable narrator." Kohler's excavations are a kind of neo-Rilkean Journal of his other Self/book, replacing the objective with the subjective, the public with the private, the innocent with the guilty, the carefully reasoned causes of history with the shape-shifting meanderings of his burrowing into Self, into women, with the Holocaust as host and every man a meanie, fascists of the heart.
As for character in this novel, its name is language. Kohler, plumber of the depths, is himself a word-man, and Gass (the name means alley in German) has so cleverly matched structure to prose, so lovingly sentenced us to sentences, that for the first fifty pages of the book we hit the wall in a series of false starts. This book is a total word war. Along the way we are treated to a blitz of metaphors, some charming (as when Kohler describes the house where he made love: "A wooden stair fell from one widened window like a slide of cards" and many of them crude ("sunning in asslight till you tan)"; given a limerick history of the world from the standpoint of nuns in bed, to wit:
I once went to bed with a nun,
who had screwed every nation but one.
I don't want to Russia,
but your Pole feels like Prussia--
far too Chile--to Finnish the pun
--Kohler's colleagues in the history department (who look like they wandered onto the page from the set of an abandoned Nabokov shoot); and informed that language is always honest; it does not lie, only its users. "Notice that 'lover' is mostly spelled by using 'over,' and 'sex' is two thirds 'ex.'
But even Gass can occasionally go wrong. Why the Rilke fascination, hasn't that been outgrown? (Kohler takes a lover names Lou, a Salome stand in and a way of doubling Rilke.) Doesn't Rilke sound oddly precious coming from this Kohler-bear, especially at the end of the novel where it seems he wants to rewrite things as a Portrait of the Artist As a Young (and very bad) Poet. Gass should stick to limericks. And the many textual experiments, like the paper bag on page 174, and the various props of the PdP (Party of the Disappointed People) are not nearly as well integrated into the project as in Willie Masters' Lonesome Wife, his 1972 novella. Instead, they seem grafted onto the narrative, with the Big M standing for Modernist; Been There, Done That. Also, he hits a bad patch of kitsch along about page 366 and skids a ways (before recovering with some good old- fashioned philosopher bashing--Hegel: Asslicker of the Absolute; Kant: He walked like a watch).
This book will be hated, which, when you think about it, is a lot to say for a book these days. Though few will know why, it will inevitably be compared to Harold Brodkey's The Runaway Soul, another thirty year writing project. (Note: Just today I got around to reading Sven Birket's review in the June Atlantic, and, sure enough, there was the obligatory Brodkey comparison.) There will be the usual grumbling about morality in fiction. John Gardner started this line with Gass (See Take One), and his surrogates will surely queue up in reviewing stands and dissertation lines to castigate Gass for the crimes of this novel--already the New York Times reviewer cannot forgive him for writing of "bedrooms as bad as Belson"--but Gass hasn't changed his mind for over thirty years. He's mad in the mouth and he can write. He spent years reading Flaubert's letters and cultivating a certain kind of anger for class-based stupidity. He's been digging this tunnel in all possible ways since his first published story, "The Pedersen Kid." His credo is that there is freedom and safety in sentences, and language replaces the life. He's playing the one note he knows. If you don't like it, I suppose he'd say, fine. Go dig your own tunnel.
7
favs |
4975 views
32 comments |
1701 words
All rights reserved. |
Criticism as fiction?
LitCritFict?
Early Mississippi Review Online, mid 1990s--
What were we thinking?
This story has no tags.
I like this alot; I know of WH Gass mostly as an essayist and enjoy this 'experimental as ineluctable' stuff. No, I don't know the work in question, but I enjoy the knowing relationship the author has w/it. It's a bit like listening to Bogdanavich talk about movies -- he's pre-eminent status as film historian supercedes his work as actor/director.
Oh so great! Hegel!
This sent me to the library...some catching up to do.
Here's the FB piece:
http://www.nytimes.com/1988/04/03/books/on-being-wrong-convicted-minimalist-spills-beans.html?pagewanted=all
note: the typo in the title...them NY Times apparently lacking humor
thanks, jack--i like bogdanovich's commentary on renoir's "rules of the game" i also liked his work in the sopranos--hehehehehe
hey jason--i spend several years of my life line by bleeping line with hegel.
john:
off to the head of the class with you!
i did an interview with FB in New Ohio Review in which we talked about this delightful "Bean" minimlist piece, and the way it was received by lit critics of the time....late 80s.
Here's the interview, from the Fn blog:
http://blog.fictionaut.com/2009/04/11/an-interview-with-frederick-barthelme/
john-on-the-spot
thanks for that
Good reading--not sure why it was in the fiction section, though. Those Carver/Gardner/Gass days seemed like exciting literary times.
thanks jon--and you are absolutely correct, this piece doesn't belong here, better in the blog. i have transgressed!
I can't answer any of your questions. Just know I like it, like... the thoughts of electrons in a constant spin. Yes.
nice image there, sam. ever the poet. sure.
Oh, shit-shit-shit! I am a non-smoker in need of a cigarette after this one.
My fave: "Notice that 'lover' is mostly spelled by using 'over,' and 'sex' is two thirds 'ex.'
Yes!
I decided to not go to the library, to let it settle as-is. So fun. I think that LitCritFict is the new Fict.
Gotta love any story that uses "to wit" followed by a colon and a quote.
And nodding to Rick to boot? How about that....
thanks, katrina--
First, I'm not familiar with William Gass. Now, I hope this is supposed to be funny, because I found it jaw-droppingly hilarious. ^_-
hi winnie,
of sure, this one is made for laughs. feel free.--
actually, bill gas does have a delightful, subversive sense of humor--
an amazing play-by-play centered on language and the work, what matters, delights and confounds
hey morgan, thanks--
i had a lot of fun with this one, back in the day--
bill gass is a pretty amazing guy, though i cannot go with him down his formalist path--as i say, he hasn't changed his mind in forty years. he is a formalist's formalist. old school.
Man, I am in awe of the way you construct. I mean it. It's a joy to read your words. You use them well, and above the call of duty. Bravo, pal.
dp,
sheesh, you said what?
lol
thanks, dp
happy merry
Gary, I'm glad you included this essay at Fictionaut; it goes here. I had read it at MR, but read it faster here (why so fast? like a car going 80, rapt). I might read the novel, not because I need a story about a difficult person but for the prose. Oh, maybe for the story. I served as assistant editor at MSS for a year, not long before it folded and before one revival of it failed. I can tell you that the fiction submissions (then), late 80s, sucked. It's interesting that Gardner wrote what he wrote (we read On Moral Fiction and heard stories about Gardner's ghost) and that Beattie literally frowned at Gass. If you haven't visited his weblog, consider it: Tao Lin has been writing authentic notes about minimalism there. (I think they're interesting and entertaining.) He is getting a lot of play with his new book: I'm a fan.
hey, ann, thanks--
i like tao lin's stuff, some of it--solicited work from him for MR a few years back--so yeah, will take a look to see what he's up to--
also interesting that you were at MSS, i did not know--
gass, like the best stylists, replenishes the language. he always used to complain at how difficult writeing was for him, how s---l--o--w--ly he wrote. i asked him if he was ever going to write a book on nietzsche, and he looked sadly at me, and wouldn't answer. finally he said, i want to, but i won't have time. he was barely seventy when he said that--
ann's frown--i have no idea if she actually frowned, and never did ask her about that--it was Gass who claimed that she did. she was, i think, next to don b. as the story goes. who knows--
Funny.
That is a brilliant limerick. Very nice piece and I like the speed of it (the form like a tunnel digging deep, right?!)
I also like the idea of mailing small postcards of criticism. Maybe we should mail them to ourselves! You'd probably take the criticism more seriously, much more poignant then an email of criticism.
Very interesting read. I love the essay form. Your take on it is both reverent of its subject, and reasonably objective. The only real indulgence I detected was '..which seemed to last as long as this paragraph.' I forgive it, though, as it made me chuckle.
I agree that Gass is an interesting writer - if a difficult one. The Tunnel, which I read several years ago, I found syntactically and typographically fascinating, though sometimes overly dense, and as I recall there was a sense of disunity in my reading of what he was doing. (You point out yourself some feeling of its faults which are hard to pin down.) But maybe that's why he's so good. I'd have liked to hear your take on the typographical elements. They look back to Sterne, and look forward to some stuff of Wallace's (Host eg). Prototype hypertext, in a sense. It's the thing which stands out when you flip through the pages of it. It's what made me want to read it. No doubt Gass's a seriously heavy hitter in the wordsmith department. He adds weight to a tradition of modernist writing you only seem to find now on the east side of the Atlantic.
eamon: i was lucky enough to study with bill gass for a brief period. he is a warm and generous man of settlred opinion. as he told me repeatedly in an interview we did, he has not changed his mind in over forty years. he is an unreconstructed formalist/modernist.
as for what you refer to as the "typographical elements" of the tunnel, and his project in that novel generally--well, i was less than thrilled. the tunnel continues the line of thought of willie master' lonesome wife (which was unconvincing to me, and had the whiff of the academic about it, as frederick barthelme says)--he used the tunnel to work out his formalist/lit theories. as such, it is a collage of dif theories, styles, genres--now he writes as joyce, now as a hack romance genre novelist, now as hostorian, now as philsopher, etc. the form of the book is designed to cause the reader to deapair of representation thinking, hit the wall in the tunnel, and start again. all this by way of saying that his project, while intellectually interesting to me, is one that i never found convincing. i did write another, more serious essay on gass, hwere i explore his linguistic ontology--it is published in the enclyclopeida of the midwest, at ohio state. if i can find it somewhere, i will send it to you--
again, thanks for your interest in my work--
Thanks Gary, I'd like to read that. One last point about Gass. Most if not all writers leave the typesetting to their publishers. Gass is the only one I know of who seems to consider the typesetting and layout of the text on the page as being of importance, of being part of the author's remit. (I'm inferring this from The Tunnel). That's why I mentioned Sterne and Wallace. Gass also connects writing to some strands in painting, many works of which use text integrally as images. That's one of Gass's points, I'm guessing here - word as image.
I gave this a node somewhere along the way. I just read it again though I really meant to read your new excerpt but then my wife called to dinner and I couldn't finish it and later I opened this and read it again. I already said that. I stopped at "He's mad in the mouth and he can write." for the longest time. I own The Tunnel complete with Gass' audio recording of it. I like his voice, I like his words, but I just don't like anything he's ever written. I think I should. I will, perhaps when I'm on the sickbed and my resistance is low. This is good though, I love literary references and you're full of them like a stuffed duck for the high holidays. Shiny.
I am literally eating every word of this fantastic essay!
glad you found and read this one, philip---it's an oldie
I read The World Within the Word long before I had enuf knowledge to comprehend enuf of it to recall now (altho I've just now opened Denis Donoghue's NYT essay, which I will read after lunch. I bought TWWTW because I'd come across a reference somewhere of a feud between Gass and Gardner, and I altho I rarely give a shit about literary feuds, for some reason this one drew my interest. I found your essay fascinating, altho many of the references are way beyond my scope. Maybe it's the insouciant tone that kept me reading above my understanding of what in hell was really going on with those bright, self-pampered, self-tortured souls. Plus, you do words real good.