Vanishing Point
We see stereoscopically. The left and right
eyes combine in the brain the minute
angular difference each one brings
and in the great, great distance
the two become one where
all things end,
conjoined.
eyes combine in the brain the minute
angular difference each one brings
and in the great, great distance
the two become one where
all things end,
conjoined.
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In perspective
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If only this could be read from bottom to top and disappearing into the distance. :)
Lxx
First mono, then hi hi, then stereo. Bird and Diz sound good each way. *
I like the use of "minute."
"all things end,/ conjoined." Love that end. Sharp piece.*
I really like how the title works with the poem. And the shape of this poem. I like that. too.*
Enjoy the layers of meaning. Noce writing, Gary. Like the form too. Shiny.
Nice.
"the minute
angular difference each one brings"
Good piece, Gary. I like.
fading into the ether...
Letitia, I pictured it above the horizon line...
Thanks, Jake, Esquerita, Emily, Gary,Frankie, Sam and James for the time and attention.
Great perspective *
Great use of form.