Introduction and Apology Written Against the End of Time
by Gary Hardaway
I write these poems for myself.
They are the only ones I like much lately.
They speak to me and my conditions.
No one need explain whatever references there are.
They articulate my fear and greater fear.
They articulate my rage and greater rage.
They articulate my failings as a human being.
They articulate my greater rage at human beings
here for such a short time and at the precipice already
close to ending the tick tock time they made
here where rare combinations of events
and rarer combinations of physical circumstances
have collided in the blossom of a yeast
leavening the crisp soft warm baguette
the young and shapely baker brings.
I should like to write a nice baguette instead.
Good couplet form here. Especially connect with the middle stanzas. Nice closing. *
You just did. Nice. *
Love the feelings evoked here. Fav
Thank you, Sam, Jake, and Woodrow. I am grateful for the generous responses.
Reminds me of this:
http://www.potw.org/archive/potw351.html
Like the couplets and the witty ending.*
I liked the whole dang thing. Sorry, I'm behind on my reading. Glad I didn't miss this one. Thank you.
"here for such a short time and at the precipice already" *
Thank you, Amanda. One of my favorites from Yeats.
Thank you, John.
Thank you, Patti. Things come and go so quickly around here...
Thank you, Beate. I loved the Straw piece.