Fun Times at the Memorial Park

Love this and the perfect opening and closing sentences.

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Excellent poem!
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(Since you have "corpses' in line 2, you can have "their faces are" in line 6.)

Good poem.

Planning on helluva Halloween shindig. *

...one...

Thank you, Paul,
and Chris,
and Bill,
and Sam,
and Matt.

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*, Gary. I always the wide-range of subjects you choose to carry your fine verse.

between "always" and "the" insert "like". Sorry.

Thank you, Amanda
and David.

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Thank you, Charlotte.

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Thank you, Loren.

Confirms my choice for cremation.*

Thank you, Gary.

hahaha... REALLY dark...
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Thanks, Deborah.

* Love the cynicism.

Thanks, Epiphany.

All the better corpses avoid political or religious discussion and the weather's so hard to discern from that depth... explains the silence. The chatty ones must suffer, waiting for the Resurrection... so long in coming.
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Thank you, James.

Enjoyed the dark. "*"

Thanks, Kyle.

Yep. Addictive.

Thanks, Meg.