First Rain of the New Year
by Gary Hardaway
Cold and small, it
filigrees the window panes.
Open your umbrella wide
and fetch the morning news.
Though warmer than ice,
the air still penetrates like fangs
fashioned from the clouds
that dome the world
a dimly luminous gray.
The black clay ground plumps up
and twists the doorways out of square.
Opened, the front door deadbolt
will not clear the strike again,
will not hold what is outside, out
or what is inside, in.
Compartments trickle together
in light diffuse and unreliable.
Fortify yourself against the day.
Drink coffee, strong and frequent.
Set the thermostat to sixty-five and wear
your thickest socks and sweater.
Scent the air with bacon
and blood oranges. Sear
then braise the cheap-cut beef
with yellow onions, clean
but unpeeled carrots, bay leaf,
rough chopped cloves of garlic,
burgundy, and consommé.
Bake cookies and potatoes.
Set ceramic logs aflame.
Settle in to hear the rain
as old cracks close and new ones open
in drywall patched and re-patched.
Penetrates like fangs
Very beautiful and extremely sensual, filled with wonderful imagery like the clouds that dome the world. Fave*
I do hear the rain in this, and I know rain.
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this is a wonderful poem.
the images present in it
are everyday things, but
because you crafted the poem
so extremely well, they feel
profound, are
as if shown as their proper
selves.
great work. really enjoyed this.
"Scent the air with bacon
and blood oranges."- my favorite part- very, very nice.
Your poem makes me feel like I'm in baseball weather, breath condensing right in front of me. Lovely atmospherics you've achieved.
Singing in the rain. Comforting. *
Sensual stuff.*
nice peek into another rainy day ritual and reflection. good work.
Thanks everyone for your comments. I am grateful.
It brings back sensual memories of the flash floods.
Read this on a cold, rainy day. Penetrated to the bone.*
Good stuff indeed.