Aesthetic Strategy
If you slice despair in samples thin enough
it acquires a fine translucence
and can be framed in multiple views
beautiful as pictures at an exhibition-
a one-man show, elegant as paintings
by a famed reductivist treasured for restraint.
it acquires a fine translucence
and can be framed in multiple views
beautiful as pictures at an exhibition-
a one-man show, elegant as paintings
by a famed reductivist treasured for restraint.
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#4 for Napomo 15
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Wry with ironic restraint. *
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"a fine translucence" - Yes. A Basho-rain-dripping moment, Gary. Good piece.
Love the two opening lines,the action and the image.
Slices of despair. Love it!
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Thank you, Matt,
Amanda,
Sam,
Carol,
Bill,
and Angela.