by Estelle Bruno
sadness
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You've written a very complex story in just twenty words. She couldn't be happy in her new life knowing what she could have had but lost. And that's why he did it: What a jerk!
A lot in a small space, Estelle. Nicely done.
thank you both for this and the favs
I think the use or lack of caps works as we feel the air coming out. Nicely done.
thank you Lou, I appreciate your thoughts.
I'd freak if my partner deleted all my photos, real or symbolic. This got to me.
You really know how to cut deep at a poem's ending. It must be from all that cooking. You make the poem then you slice and dice. *
I think she did freak, internally. Thanks for your take on this.
p.s. I meant that for you Christopher.
Ouch! I feel for her. Nicely done. *
Good poem, Estelle.
thanks for reading and liking my poem, Bill
You've written a very complex story in just twenty words. She couldn't be happy in her new life knowing what she could have had but lost. And that's why he did it: What a jerk!
A lot in a small space, Estelle. Nicely done.
thank you both for this and the favs
I think the use or lack of caps works as we feel the air coming out. Nicely done.
thank you Lou, I appreciate your thoughts.
I'd freak if my partner deleted all my photos, real or symbolic. This got to me.
You really know how to cut deep at a poem's ending. It must be from all that cooking. You make the poem then you slice and dice.
*
I think she did freak, internally. Thanks for your take on this.
p.s. I meant that for you Christopher.
Ouch! I feel for her. Nicely done. *
Good poem, Estelle.
thanks for reading and liking my poem, Bill