Dawn is spreading its pink and blue colours over the morning. Pleasant hues, with children playing and birds chattering. A light morning, without commitments, without waves, open to promises. Mornings don't speak our language and don't make the same gestures. They speak a language both simple and ambiguous, trying patiently to teach it to us. During one of these lessons, sitting on the bench, I learned a number of words which I repeat with pride to myself throughout the day. Tomorrow, I'll learn other words to widen my collection, and one day perhaps I'll compose a poem in the morning's language to be published in the journal Morning Words.
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A translation of my original French text.
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"A delicate sensibility rendered with gentle precision." That's one of Matt Paust's comments. I couldn't say it better.
Thank you Dianne. I remember M.P. and his kind nature.
Lovely.
Like Gary said, "Lovely."*
And thanks Dianne for mentioning Matt Paust. I know we all miss him.
Thank you Tim and Gary.
What a lovely quote of M.P. it is true here... great work!
Thank you Agnes.
Nicely done prose poem, Erika.
Many thanks Ed.
Mornings are my favourite time. Blue shadows and pink sunlight. You paint a pleasant picture.
Thanks Eamon.
Mornings are all about promise and potential. Fine work, Erika!
True about mornings, Todd. Thank you for the comment.