Blankets were always her undoing, what with their fuzzy pills and coffee stains and thinly offered fake comforts. This one had been her mother's, that bitch, and never worked right. Holes and loose threads and this odd misshape that rarely covered her radio, much less the stainless steel perculator she'd found (!) behind Walgreens. Instead of a big keep out, it screamed come steal my shit, so people did. Pellets from the waylaid bird feeder lit a runway toward her crawled spaces, the prize being her collection of flags from six unknown countries. Or store grand openings. One quilt, she knew, would change everything.
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Day Two of the 90 microflash stories in 90 days writing challenge. Cross-posted at emagination.org
Nice micro.
Fresh, controlled, a really enjoyable piece.
"...fuzzy pills..." Great.
And the ",she knew," in the last sentence made more difference than I would have ever guessed.
Lots of macro hiding behind this micro, and you build a vivid flash of characterization.
Solid piece of writing, Erica - Especially like the closing: "One quilt, she knew, would change everything." I really connect with that. Good work for the challenge.