by Ed Higgins
what-ta-hell, fuck this
he snorts brushing
the dust from his shoulders
reeking sweat
a rictus grimace
bent with aching knees
ankles a mess
soles calloused
and slit
a deserved glass of white wine
to wash away the exhaustion
yes, wash the guilt too
hubris-cleverness
offending Zeus
hopeless addled dreams
God knows he can't be
switched to a worse punishment
every climb to the sky
a bittersweet birdsong
moments later fading into
echo off eroding canyon walls
his bruised heart over the years
hardened to grey stitched pain
in the winter
a fleece of snow
adding to the slipperiness
of the scree
fuck this, he says again.
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(in: The Gentian Journal, Adriano Noble, Editor, Issue 11, Spring/Summer 2022, https://thegentian.wordpress.com/publications/)
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Wow! So much to admire here. Every image, every detail resonates.
"he says again " is quite a closer. Terrific work.
Image after image builds wonderfully!
Laborious climb so finely described.
Excellent.
"I ain't going into work today."*
(from a tune of mine)
Very fine.
Take this job and shove it: Just Great.
"his bruised heart over the years
hardened to grey stitched pain"
Really enjoyed this!