by eamon byrne
THIS is what happened — the dead went into remission. Dated may 10 2010. Or it could have been some other day. They were going to be restored later. That's what we were being told. The dead were being given stones to mark their remission. They were getting marks on their stones to keep a few routines safe for the living.
They say the best function is woman — lovely and suitable for switching us on using her dna code, which is the best code there is. They say there is a flaw in some of her code. The code for the living. Not the dead. There's no flaw in the dead.
We blame her.
It starts fixed — a simple matter of splitting a few chromosomes. All are young at first. All are new. The output is cleansed of all old people who are bad rubbish. All old news is trashed as bad news, leaving only the good news saved. We can only tolerate the good news.
The good news is to be put on the stones. The most pithy texts are for the stones.
We forget easily.
This is a version.
From the assylum screw all. Crazies are sent to the place which the assylum supplies personnel to. A crazy is exported from that place only when no longer useful. This output is standard issue.
The crazy goes back to his woman. Then it starts all over again. He blames her.
From this version screw all.
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Blame women!!!! I like its oddity.
Strange and beautiful.*
Without someone to blame where in hell would any of us be???
weird and effective
Looks like a utopia/distopia spinning out from language, or sentences. Does it go from here or stop? Perhaps all possibilities have not been exhausted. Even so, this is fine.
Thanks for all comments. I don't understand it either.
Wonderfully strange. Agree with David, there is more to explore here.
"The good news is to be put on the stones. The most pithy texts are for the stones.
We forget easily.
This is a version."
Good work.
Odd and interesting and enjoyable.