Max Beckmann Poem

This determination feels so profound. I think you've touched on an essential aspect of what it means to be human. *

The unutterable uttered. *

A perfect mantra:

"to
grasp
the
unutterable
things of
this
world"

Great piece. Form works well - headed toward the terrible monster. *

Thank you, Paul, Jake, and Sam. Great comments!

This is great and I agree with everyone's comments. The form is like an exclamation point to the content. *

Thanks so much, Charlotte, for reading and commenting.

Cool comment by Charlotte, too. A breath of air in a column of thought, a bagpipe or vocal chord. Appropriative verse with attribution. I favor that attribution as well. *

Thank you, Ann!

Wonderful.

Thanks, Darryl. All the credit to Max.