by Ann Bogle
Oed is Dead almost about to ...
I feel sick from alcohol but that is not all. I will not fall down from alcohol but from something more piercing and not self-hate. I am dizzy from trying as you will see.
This is a crucial opportunity, but there are other opportunities that I pass up everyday in the absence of crisis.
This is a crucial opportunity, but there are other opportunities that I pass up everyday in the absence of crisis.
There are "N" words that are my first choice: NO, never, neither, nor, not, knit.
I reach for these words automatically every time I pick up a pen. They are the first to appear. Always. And sometimes, I think of flowers and green plants early in the writing process.
Today—with the present crisis—I will resist "N" words or follow them to unnatural conclusions.
I COULD always sleep. Go "home" now and sleep. My body and my fetus—who complain of this torture—would appreciate sleep. I have something to do that is not sleep. I have something to do that is not sleep. I have to try to wake.
Over and over I am under.
Under the weather. Underweight. Untergedrückt ("pushed under"—depressed).
Under. There is an impulse with under not to rise. It is like sleeping but with humiliation. Sleeping is not humiliation but a release from humiliation.
Over and over I am under.
And then I sleep.
But sleeping is not humiliation.
It is a release from humiliation.
Today is an opportunity—among many—to not sleep—to not say NO to waking. It is only hard to say NO to "N" words—or to SLEEP.
Now—and "now" is also an "N" word—I am realizing the potency of sleep, and how I must and will sleep soon.
"Soon" must inevitably be an "N" word as well. Like Ann—and damn. Or Dawn. "And" is "N" too.
N
is like "Nevins"—Lori's name—and "never", like "Name."
N is not in lake nor in water but in everything surrounding like nuptial—like nascent—an archaic word.
To Be Born. With or without "N"—a line, to learn.
Orange. Oran Je—as Cixous (Hélène) and orange—benign tumors growing in my leg and breast and arm and in my—NOW—womb. Orange.
Santo. The flamed Saint. Santo. Dying in gasoline flame amidst guilt over sexual duress. Dead.
"N" is Sun and Sand. as well __ __
Three Studies with Can Contents: —this is a poem of mine. There are Can and Content words entirely composed with "N".
Something women and men have in common, that is Woman and Man, have in common: the simple, the Ur letter: N
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B.A. graduation in English, major, August 1984. Prose poem, Spring 1985, Smith Corona, 1 N. Bedford Street, 53703
This is a sketch of the new direction of my second volume of stories:
This is what struggling against depression looks like from the inside. Brave.
Very interesting stream of consciousness, Ann. It makes the reader feel his own sinking into, and then the breaking away from the bed pillows.
I wish I could fav it, seriously. It's elegant for my age then of 22, I see. *
Fantastic work at 22, Ann. You can feel that looseness that comes with writing at that age, kind of a blessed sense of being alone with just the words in your head and leaving all the rest of the bullshit outside where it belongs. Makes me miss those days of telling stories for myself and that being enough.
"N is not in lake nor in water but in everything surrounding like nuptial—like nascent—an archaic word."
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An interesting movement throgh linguistic spacetime.
Kudos to you for analyzing the linguistic implications of your work.*
Wow, thanks all, especially Sheldon and Sam for their comments, and all again and it's good to see Susan Gibb.
Fascinating journey. *