Why does she engage if it teaches literature agrees that living is an husband. What you were given as experience -- accident this is as you write about it. You were given blame for action as experience by cause and effect now. If you take apart blame and even forgiveness is too rigid. She thinks of that purpose as to give men sexual destiny. She believes action result of grave faults in a person's life is not her phenomenon. Go on living each trouble born is accepting human being teaching gratification literature. She is a feminist invented at A.A. Fate is activities selected. She embodied no acceptance without A.A. She has invited to live the many of them her own, that in other such as -- specifically, her husband -- caused by the person in it. She thinks to in his environment if she were not to be pleasuring she would not be she. Or s/he your.
Rationing a portion of her brown bear sympathy for the rapist whose victim laid a trap and counterclockwise he relents at her. With brown bear's nature rubs atop her. Police would shoot him. Victims! scales nethering -- left the car or tent again. Sit inside it. She, professor, seeds joy at animal virtuosity. He wins her (almost) and never tardily.
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What you were caused by the person in it and effect. She in other activities such as teaching believes each she thinks going on living forgiveness is to live A.A. She has give men -- she is a feminist. Not to be she is embodied. She thinks of her grave faults invented at A.A. She believes no teaches literature given as an experience -- this is as you believes action in a person's life is human being is to blame for action in rigid. Acceptance is a phenomenon accepting that she was born specifically, her now husband -- sexual her husband she would not be in of them her own. Why does she if it agrees that living is an accident by cause environment. If you take apart she her destiny. She believes fate is and even about it. You were given as without literature purpose that is to is the result of if she were.
Sympathy for the rapist left the house again with brown bear's nature what animal virtuosity. Wins (almost) and never tardily relents at her. Brown bear rationing a portion of her. Victims! scales nethering -- sit inside it. She, professor goes joy at whose victim laid a trap for him climbing on her professor and counterclockwise. Police would shoot him.
Rationing a portion of her brown bear sympathy for the rapist whose victim laid a trap and counterclockwise he relents at her. With brown bear's nature rubs atop her. Police would shoot him. Victims! scales nethering -- left the car or tent again. Sit inside it. She, professor, seeds joy at animal virtuosity. He wins her (almost) and never tardily.
[Sad linguistic terms for it.]
What you were caused by the person in it and effect. She in other activities such as teaching believes each she thinks going on living forgiveness is to live A.A. She has give men -- she is a feminist. Not to be she is embodied. She thinks of her grave faults invented at A.A. She believes no teaches literature given as an experience -- this is as you believes action in a person's life is human being is to blame for action in rigid. Acceptance is a phenomenon accepting that she was born specifically, her now husband -- sexual her husband she would not be in of them her own. Why does she if it agrees that living is an accident by cause environment. If you take apart she her destiny. She believes fate is and even about it. You were given as without literature purpose that is to is the result of if she were.
Sympathy for the rapist left the house again with brown bear's nature what animal virtuosity. Wins (almost) and never tardily relents at her. Brown bear rationing a portion of her. Victims! scales nethering -- sit inside it. She, professor goes joy at whose victim laid a trap for him climbing on her professor and counterclockwise. Police would shoot him.
Great syntax, Ann - "What you were caused by the person in it and effect. She in other activities such as teaching believes each she thinks going on living forgiveness is to live A.A. She has give men -- she is a feminist. Not to be she is embodied. She thinks of her grave faults invented at A.A. She believes no teaches literature given as an experience -- this is as you believes action in a person's life is human being is to blame for action in rigid."
I really connect with the atmosphere the language creates here. Great form and closing. I like this piece.
Ann, this is fascinating. I love what the "cut-up" language does to the narrative. I love:
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"She has give men--she is a feminist."
and how this closes..I keep reading this, would love to know more about how you went about it. I've never seen this form before. **
Thanks, Sam and Kathy. Kathy, all I remember about the source of this was that it began in a rare bout of prose venting about an issue with a friend. I normally talk to myself to vent. I do remember arranging it as a prose cut-up (literally ribboning it with scissors) and working two versions of it -- both given here -- and that it felt a lot like writing a poem.
Thanks. Really interesting. I like what the sentences do, this way.
I feel dumb.
I know what you mean, Cherise -I think I've experienced this more than fully comprehended it. Kathy asked my Q. Your cut-up process would make a fascinating video, or as a Jenny Holzer-esque projection. My response to this feels also like a cut-up as I've just finished watching a nature program on TV and that + having now read this story several times, I'm feeling sympathy for the brown bear. This: 'seed joy at animal virtuosity' and this: 'She believes no teaches literature given as an experience -- this is as you believes action in a person's life is human being is to blame for action in rigid.' I ramble. *
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To really appreciate this piece, read Seven Dada Manifestos by Tristram Tzara.
I love what you do here, Ann.
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Reads like Coover on steroids! Fantastic experiment! *
Coover on steroids (heh) Ditto and fave. I love experiments.
oh, so cool this. accolades, deserved. phenomenon you are. ann gertrude thank thee for verse stein.
Glad this twining is working for you, all. And thanks, Cherise, for alerting me if it doesn't.
Felt like I was reading an N-5 transcript.
This comment arrived privately yesterday: "I just wanted to tell you that the way the sentences in that piece work, particularly with the brown bear and the rapist and the victims!, is probably the closest I've seen to a representation or written enactment of the experience of distancing & thoughts twists and braiding following the sexual assault that was done to me. It's an incredibly powerful read."