by Amanda Deo
We were born here. At the top of the stairs underneath a painting of basset hounds playing croquet. And a hallway closet filled with lost someones. And the police, three times a week, singing nursery rhymes while walking up to our door.
I'll tell you how sad I was. Enough to call my highschool principal and ask him out on a date. Enough to walk around the house naked for a month pretending I didn't have anything suitable to wear. And when you asked me to put on some pants I said I just didn't have anything suitable to wear. And you came over and rested your hands on top of my head, parting my hair into two equal parts. You said, these are the two parts you keep in.
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I've been listening to this electronic song on repeat by an artist whose name, Sailor and I, is a metaphor for the two beings inside him that are in constant battle. A dichotomy of self. A Jekyll and a Hyde.
"underneath a painting of basset hounds playing croquet..." alone makes this a highly worthy read.
" these are the two parts you keep in" - Good work. Nicely done. Enjoyed.
Amazing.*
Good piece Amanda. Power in brevity. Thought provoking and evocative. *
Unsettling. Reverberative.
Thanks guys! You are just too kind. Far too kind.