by A. Pseudonym
Where the sharp white ribs of cattle stand
and stake the silent rust-red land
and pierce the rocks amid the sand
a man sees salamander bands
a-cracklin on the scree
Where the sun has hit their lizard skin
and dried them from the outside in
and stopped the pitter patter din
of feet so fine and the unshod shins
of what had tried to be
Wrapped white against the seer and glare
he scarce can bare to tarry there
so steps around and on to where
the footfall takes and brings to bear
the path that makes him me
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What's more fun that rhyming gloom?
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Although I'm not a fan of poems that rhyme, I like this one.
Have to agree. Stuck with me. Nice work.
Wow, this is so good I read it twice, A.
The cadence carries it on from line to line and ends it well on the last bit of each verse. The finishing line is spectacular, too. In Australia we have an on going drought and this picture-minds it perfectly. Loved it!
Rhythmic and packed with purpose.
Thanks for the comments!