by Ulrica Hume
She is an old soul. We talk of Barbie dolls and school. Her hands weaving stories. Maybe a hesitant smile. Eyes soft, earth-brown pansies, sadly martyred.
An old man steers his car up a hill. Passes through hoops of sky before powerlessly plunging. On the news I hear about the other cars, the domino effect. Little girl trapped inside.
Her father waits that night for her to return. Pacing, as if she is on a first date. Bronze shows through the drapes, a ring of light like a burning candle. Benediction. Dreams like honey. He leaves the porch light on.
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this flash piece appeared in 100 Word Story, and in the Nothing Short Of anthology (Outpost19 Books).
A cunning bouquet of sorrows.
Impressionistic writing. *
Powerful darkness in this piece.
"Benediction. Dreams like honey. He leaves the porch light on."
Great work.
Sets a mood, pulls one in. Enjoyed it very much. *