by Tina Barry
My mother tells her friend on the phone about my father's latest misdeeds: he's lost money at the track, meant for my brother's tenth birthday party, a no-big-deal family thing at a diner, but still. Her voice gets screechy as she talks of the boy he was caught fondling in the bathroom of a bowling alley. The worst part: the dumb schmuck doesn't even bowl. I don't need to hear the flat ah-has and hmms of the listener to know she's not interested. Mother sits at the dining room table, legs thrust underneath, a filmy nylon nightgown brushing her knees, her calves dry and scratched. I'm stretched out beneath the table watching her feet rub together like another pair of fussing hands.
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Table Talk is in Mall Flower, my new book of poems and short stories. It was just nominated for a Pushcart Prize.
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"like another pair of fussing hands." ***
Congratulations on the nomination.
Thanks for the star and congrats, Rachna!
"Misdeeds" indeed. Yes, congrats--and may Pushcart agree. *
Thanks, Mathew!
Very fine, Tina, Congratulations!
Thanks, David. Your book is on its way.
"Her voice gets screechy as she talks of the boy he was caught fondling in the bathroom of a bowling alley. The worst part: the dumb schmuck doesn't even bowl. I don't need to hear the flat ah-has and hmms of the listener to know she's not interested."
Perfectly executed turn.*
Thanks for the kind words about table talk,
Amanda, and thanks for the star.
Nicely turned. Congrats on the nomination.*
Nicely turned. Congrats on the nomination.*
Thanks so much, Gary!
" Mother sits at the dining room table, legs thrust underneath, a filmy nylon nightgown brushing her knees, her calves dry and scratched."
This image within the context does it for me. So.Good.
Congrats! *
Thanks so much, Charlotte, for the kind words about Table Talk, and for the star!
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Thanks for giving table talk a star, Sam!