Shiny Dime
I saw the shiny dime on the floor at the same time as the young girl behind me holding her mother's hand. When I leaned down to get the coin the girl's eyes changed from excited to crestfallen. And then to joy as I held it out and she knew it was really for her.
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Author's Note
My 55-word flash fiction stories come mostly from my experiences. This one is true. I'll add another from time to time.
Other stories by Thomas M. Logan, Jr.
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Nice.
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Enjoyed being in this moment. "Crestfallen" is a great word!
Beautifully crafted.
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Welcome, Thomas. Nice 55. *
Yeah. Nice. A happy ending!