She awakened and thought at first that the noise coming from the basement was an intruder, that someone was down there and might cause her harm. Then she remembered that the furnace had been erratic lately and had made some strange noises. She drifted off back to sleep.
She had been right the first time.
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Eerie. Lingering. Change "would" to "might" and you'll create even more tension ...
The opening of a crime scene.