vers libre inexplicable, mock sonnet, half villanelle
by strannikov
a lesson or two from the Sisters Papin
i
the Sisters Papin at play with their dolls
enucleate sockets two at a time
of feathered eyes with no fuss or complaint.
theory confirmed with empiric pursuit—
though hammering heads of dolls never yields
slick messes of gore on clean parlor floors
empiricists might more expect to find—
in a kitchen!—where instruments are found,
sharp and blunt tools for empiric pursuits!
(when serious matters come to the fore,
do keep the lights on—rooms can get confused:
empiric pursuits deserve well-lit rooms.)
ii
the Lancelin ladies, those poor dears dead:
murder can pose such indignities, see?
you're dead, you've been dead, and still you're carved up!
sure victims of the Sisters' lethal rage—
although had police not arrived so quick,
the crime might have classed as rage culinaire:
“the ladies weren't beaten but ‘tenderized'—
one clove of garlic per stab, three per slice—
more menu decisions never were made!
such sumptuous fare whole fam'lies could feed!”
—had science culinaire not been debarred
by petty jurisprudential pursuits.
black forests
now who might harvest this forest of trees?
houses to birds and to insects galore
(even to termites, the insects that bore),
they'd been left to stand, exhaling each breeze.
a party was held, a fireworks display
to brighten the dawn of a dark'ning day:
but one branch caught fire, a limb, then a trunk—
stupefied celebrants watched them blaze drunk:
by the time they thought to report the fire,
the flames spread wide before flaming higher.
there'll be no harvest of these blackened trees,
they'll topple on down the next sturdy breeze—
a licorice beetle creeps through their night,
antennas atwitch, averting all light.
tyrannies of stage
this vaudeville world has turned all into stage—
the message appears on each screen and page:
every domain and institution—staged.
“the real world” for which newsmen earn their wage—
costume, make-up, mics, cameras, lights, script page:
this vaudeville world has turned all into stage.
mandrills and baboons perform from each cage
‘neath capitol domes, closed-circuit engaged:
every domain and institution—staged.
cell phones record as each cognitive sage
parades sandwich boards for our vaudeville age:
this vaudeville world has turned all into stage.
celebrity cults, each sick sarcophage—
consumptions performed and hungers enraged:
every domain and institution—staged.
who'd've thought cameras could spark lying rage,
souls all mis-measured by external gauge?
this vaudeville world has turned all into stage:
every domain and institution—staged.
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Author's Note
Still no poet, I did pick up a copy of Robert Hass's Little Book on Form, which I've not read cover to cover. (I also picked up a copy of Strand and Boland's Making of a Poem, which also I've consulted only fitfully.)
"Vers libre" I at least begin to approach with metrical intent.
The "sonnet" here at least indulges in end-rime, a form still not to my taste.
--and what I term a "half villanelle" shows at least an initial dissatisfaction with the traditional rime scheme.
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Faved for "enucleate" and "rage culinaire." And I like the rhyming and swinging and repetitions, altho have never had the patience or interest, frankly, to study form in and of itself. (I hung out with a bird-watching group for a while, but gave up when I couldn't get the hang of which tweets and twitters went with which tweeter or twitterer.)
I love this, love the sense of form creeping out. It's wonderful read aloud.
Perfect time of year. I thought of 73.
"a licorice beetle creeps through their night,
antennas atwitch, averting all light." One of many I admire. Bravo!
Matvei: bolshoi spasibo X 3!
Though I've not made the best use of their books, I do recommend both Hass's title and Strand & Boland's as good reference tools--they treat more forms than I expect ever to work with. (Over the years, I've likely gained more from Thrall, Hibbard & Holman's Handbook to Literature [Rev. Ed.].)
--and I still prefer internal rime to end rime, for now, but I have begun to play with end rime in small doses.
Thank you again, as ever.
Dianne: thank you, thank you, and thank you muchly.
As it came out in a recent experiment with (iambic) tetrameter:
"I hear them in their miseries / the troubled poets' mysteries / --but that's not what afflicted me: / from infancy, what clicked with me / was sense, not sound--rime interposed / diversions that my ears opposed / . . . "
Many thanks again, as ever.