by Steven Gowin
For my pal, Kevin R.
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Nicely done.
November rain. **
**
There is something alluring about drinking hot coffee in cold rain.
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*, Steven. This spare verse is strong.
Nice unfolding of the poem- Good.
Yeah.*
So much implied, & realized,, life in "Dream Life."
Lovely *
*Pardon the cliché, but every word here "speaks to me."
Nicely done.
November rain. **
**
There is something alluring about drinking hot coffee in cold rain.
*
*, Steven. This spare verse is strong.
*
Nice unfolding of the poem- Good.
Yeah.*
So much implied, & realized,, life in "Dream Life."
Lovely *
*Pardon the cliché, but every word here "speaks to me."