In this sector of the estuary you swim through continuous showers of sunlight and krill and the array of regularly spaced wavering human forms floating upright seems to extend endlessly in all directions. Each wears a trench coat and private-eye fedora, hundreds of Jean-Paul Belmondos imitating Bogart in the entrance of as many invisible movie theaters; each is tied by the ankles to the bottom like a soldier in Emperor Qin's terracotta army except under water and made from something like kelp as if molded by beings who have seen images of human bodies but never touched skin, a dreaming from deep space made from television signals and repetition. When you navigate the rows of Jean-Paul Belmondos you echo in each passage of a thumb across lips but when you touch one it explodes into vegetable chaos. In this sector of the estuary for the length of a breath you can lie on the bottom and look back at the tourists overhead in glass-bottomed boats beneath the overlapping gazes of surveillance satellites or let yourself float toward the surface through the amniotic haze.
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sometimes a documentary sequence just presents a state of affairs and ends once it has finished presenting that state of affairs.
52/250: crowd.
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Great imagery. Love where you go in this.
"...hundreds of Jean-Paul Belmondos imitating Bogart in the entrance of as many invisible movie theaters; each is tied by the ankles to the bottom like a soldier in Emperor Qin's terracotta army except under water and made from something like kelp as if molded by beings who have seen images of human bodies but never touched skin, a dreaming from deep space made from television signals and repetition." I like this excellent well. Nice work.
I don't know if it's because I'm reading Donald Barthelme these days, but "When you navigate the rows of Jean-Paul Belmondos you echo in each passage of a thumb across lips but when you touch one it explodes into vegetable chaos." - really connects. The piece has his flavor. Good voice in the writing, Stephen.
Walked into this one with history.
Great piece.
thanks very much for the read and comments. i'm pleased that the piece works for you. not entirely sure where it came from--i think it got started because i wanted to do the madison...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I6pOXjQLh7Y
Bursting. *
the last line and sequence of images... lordy.
nice. thanks christopher & meg, for the reads, lovely comments and faves.
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