Funky heartbeats hit hard in
chest bump bass Detroit
each crack webbed over Woodward Avenue
treble to the trembling ratty Caddies
soul black as night
dark as the house drummer at Baker's
backbeat thick as bulletproof glass
a hole to put the cash through
a hole to order your Big Mac through
a hole in the road to pocket the rhythm through
they fucking didn't pickup the trash again
come to think of it
there's no fucking garbagemen at all
six blocks of boarded windows
and one house where a stony old lady
waters her flowers with Billie Holiday
blasting from the spicy insides of her flesh
son a superfly
alligator shoe clad
networking man
working a beeper and flip phone
twisting blueberry spliffs
on ma's porch
white dude in a Saturn
cruising anxious
windows up doors locked
sauntering driving circles
scared to ask directions
postapocalyptic blues
a heavy-handed snap and pop
from Bootsy's starchild bass
retro ruins pleading
reverse the crumbling
this city has life dormant
trapped below like Cthulu
waiting to skewer the world with soul
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Detroit is MY city. Give it some love.
Your suburban fans might have a tough time getting arms wrapped around this, but I completely get it and you've tuned straight in. I HAVE been that guy in the Saturn, unfortunately. This is an astute, well made piece.
Thank you. Fuck those suburbanites anyways, right? they must be dominating fictionaut these days, because all of the sudden I don't get any likes anymore... or maybe it's because I don't do the needed networking/asskissing to garner faves. I've noticed that the number of faves has absolutely no relation to the quality of the piece.