A young man at mid morning
Collapsed on you, dropped his books
One leg bent
The other leg slacked
Towards the ground
He slept balancing his knee
Like a Wallenda
Adjusted his head under his arm
Shielded his eyes from daylight
When he woke, he scratched his head,
Marched on,
I stifled a laugh
For my youth now gone
Then daylight's lovely lantern
Dressed in yellow white
cleanness
Danced a ballet towards
Her majesty's park bench
She did! She sat on you!
Transformed you
Into something
Antique and elegant
Victorian or Upper West side
A Manhattan penthouse parlor
Adornment
She with her book in hand
A small one
La femme petite
Posed for Monet
On a patch of scenery
I lifted my hand
Positioned my wrist
As if holding a brush
Painted a still of spontaneity
The girl
And her other
you
She left
Beckoned away
By a cell phone
And,
Like little mice
They came
Early risers
Get up and go'ers
The 6am to 2pm
Tribe
Scampered on so busy
‘Must get going'
‘I'll catch up with you later'
‘Can't right now'
‘Who has the time?'
‘Let me think about it
and I'll get back to you'
Not one of them stopped to sit
On you or remark
Not one of them dreamed to
Subtly or accidentally
Create beauty
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This is a poem I've put through revision. I'm thinking of scrapping it so I hope you all can help me tip the scale either way (keep it or scrap it).
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I love how you've made a character of this bench and how you've used it as a way of creating a window onto The City and its various tribes. Nice piece. *
Bravo Roberto... I felt like I was sitting there with you, admiring the park bench.
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Aaah, the park bench. Loved this.
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So much to take in from a park bench and you've crafted this admirably. Lovely prose and a big fave.
Enjoyed the poem's rhythms and form, Roberto.
Pretty stuff.*
Thanks guys! All critical feedback welcome.