The letter never found an eye.
I opened it, forgetting it was mine;
its paper worn to dough, its ink a ghosted blue
on the page. I could just make out words,
untethered sentences: '. . . your decision,'
'. . . years from now,' '. . . A risk on my part.'
To whom had I wanted to send it? No face
came back to me. It was an erasure now,
made with years of bad weather. The rest
was conjecture -- my eyes trying to make
out its runes; a puzzle. I kept it.
I put it back in the wet and crumbling box.
All day I thought of it -- by whom it may
have been held. The winter kept its promise
of snow. I do not have the hand
I had then, nor the paper -- not an image
came to me. And this is where we end --
the exorbitant eye of forgotten days.
I like this but thought it could do with a little tightening:
The letter never found an eye.
I opened it, forgetting
that it was mine;
its paper worn to dough,
its ink a ghosted blue,
I could just make out words,
untethered sentences.
To whom had I wished to send it? No face returned. It was
an erasure now,
and the rest, conjecture --
my eyes trying
to make out its runes; a puzzle. I put it back
in the wet and crumbling box.
All day I thought of it --
by whom it may have been held. The winter kept its promise
I do not have the hand I had then, nor the paper --
not an image
came to me. And this
is where we end --
the exorbitant eye
of forgotten days.
Nicely done.
A pregnant mystery, and a little frightening.
Enjoyed this.
Yeah, "the exorbitant eye of forgotten days." Well captured.