Edward Ogle the First
by Peter Erich
Vundabar
baclava
xanadu, beret.
Cookie jar
shark tiara
shit fondu, parade.
Sandle wood
handlebar
celery fart, hooray.
Beer suds
fountain mug
cheers and checkmate.
Getting glowworm crazy
in cozy jacuzzi.
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Haha. This is fun. Something in tiger car, celebrate. throws the rhythm for me though.
@frankie, i agree. tiger car is too harsh, especially next to celebrate. i will keep playing with this and see what happens. thank you for your feedback!
:) First stanza is exuberant.
@frankie, made an edit. way better than tiger car.