by Paula Ray
Your faded presence in sepia dream returns,
firelight whispers and vanilla scented ash.
We were a beautiful knot: sinew and hemp,
burlap and magnolia petal, concrete and vapor.
Gray kisses hovered overhead, misty visions,
a strong invisible grip inside a prayer,
hands folded into origami chapels
where our heart-shaped bells rang.
Time swayed, quiet, slow-dancing in starlight.
My heart, skipping across the water,
only to sink before reaching your shore.
And somehow, a magnolia moon has found you.
You, with your shovel, beaded brow, and purpose,
digging up roots to set me free.
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pubbed in Poery Quarterly 2015
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I like this but I'd change "misty visions" and "heart-shaped bells".
I trust you will give this a few tweaks and then sing it. It will be good.
I particularly like "Time swayed, quiet, slow-dancing in starlight." Also, all the other action verbs. The movement.*
The images dance. *
"And somehow, a magnolia moon has found you."
Good poem, Paula.
Love the last stanza. **
Lots of beauty here among the "vanilla-scented ash."
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The moon is powerful .*