He had that not-interested-come-hither look
with a too-cool-to-smile upward nod.
Shaggy beast with bad ass tattoos displayed
on his biceps, flexing as he stroked the cue.
She was the pocket watch, bend-over girl,
with a love-me-deadly-daddy-done-me-wrong-pout.
No teeth were flashing, but the fangs were visible.
The prowl was on and I was just sitting in the corner
Stirring my stories with a straw that sucked characters
out of bars. Needed something to soothe this burn
in my gut. Watched the exit like a hungry badger
ready to bite at the fresh air if it slapped me in the face.
Don't like cigarettes, but the smoke swirled a mean
dream around scenes that came alive in a marijuana
dojo where karate matches looked unrehearsed,
there were no bows at the beginning or the end
of kicks and board breaking chops.
I had a gig-bag hanging on the chairback, unzipped,
wide-mouthed staring at the drunk geezer
burping up acid from a liver gone sour-milk
and he had the guts to smile at me.
Handed him a roll-over-pass-out-tablet
with get-a-life-grampa eye-roll-politeness,
but he took it like a man and I gave him
half a smile for having stamina in this marathon.
Back to the game, my eyes caught pinky peacock prancing
swaying lick-me-now invitations Rockhead's direction and he
showed what he wanted from her with tongue rimming a slick
long necked bottle that went in a bit too far as he drank.
He chugged it all down, swallowed hard, and turned his head
and said "ahh" with a raised get-the-idea-brow. And she did.
Wasn't long before she was bottom-lip-biting-hair-flipping
toward him, making sure she jiggled on the down beat.
Nothing ever changed much except the posters on the wall. I checked
the set list on breaks and held the paper like a "do not disturb" sign.
Guys in the band went out panty-huffing Mary Jane in a old bread truck.
I scribbled my escape, counting call-me dollars from the tip jar.
Sometimes, that jar seemed to be my bra. Should have sewn
a little pocket to fit their cop-a-feel hands, but I didn't
want no look-up-your-skirt compliments. I wanted to shut
my eyes and grab my sax like he was Pegasus and fly away.
Word riot certainly fits. As an "observe and report" kind of piece, this poem cuts wonderfully deep. The straw "that sucked characters out of bars" and the "do-not disturb" set list are fabulous, as are the other images.
This is nice work, Paula. I like the form - and your approach to the line.
You will never forget that first publication. Happy anniversary, Paula. Love this. Love: "smoke swirled a mean dream around scenes..." Reads like a song.
Interesting to see the evolution of your style. But you had it from the beginning, Paula!
No teeth were flashing but the fangs were visible- wonderful! This one's got grit and polish all rolled into one. Loaded with elusion and atmosphere.
Thank you so much, Paul, Sam, Bill, Kathy, and Dean. I appreciate your comments. Yes, we never forget the first.
Love the stringing together of hypened words, the whole piece has a great rhythm to it.
And congrats on the publication!