by Matt Potter
“Get ya hands outta there, ya filthy old cunt!”
I look up, his distorted face hurling more abuse.
Blurring my eyes, I look over the roofline of his fruit and veg store and to the sky beyond. Then back down into the bowels of the rubbish bin.
His anger floats over me as I fossick inside, Wednesday gloves black with grime. Thursday's, Friday's and Saturday's pairs, washed and dried, sit in wait beside my front door.
Newspapers, a banana skin, fast food wrappers and then gold! A soft drink bottle, two cans and — lucky me — three iced coffee cartons. We get a refund on those here too.
“Take ya fucking trolley and ya shitty bags and fuck off!” he yells.
Why doesn't he uproot the rubbish bin from the footpath, if he doesn't want me here? No one else would blame him.
I straighten my back, and push the bottle, cans and cartons inside the plastic bags in my trolley. Then I stare at him, my arms hanging loose at my sides, my polyester frock — my work uniform — worn and faded. And I flash him a smile, sucking my gums: I keep my teeth at home.
“I could be your mother,” I say.
His jaw drops at the sound of my voice.
Grabbing the trolley handle, I push it up the street. Home is fifteen minutes walk. Once inside, I'll sort out the takings, shower and change, and play Mozart on my iPod.
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This story was written for Week #42 of '52 / 250 - A Year of Flash' (theme: under wraps). I don't know where it came from, really, but I am always fascinated by people whose lives appear to be one thing, but are also something else, or actually completely contrary to appearances.
Matt, I love to learn a new word, for me, in this story it's "fossick." It sets the tone for this intelligent yet unfortunate (and nearly fortunate) person who rummages. *
A sad and bizarre tale of a life perhaps not quite as it seems. Sigh. Aren't they all, one way or another? This has the strong ring of truth and the sensory details are powerful: the fruits and a simple mention of the sky
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Thank you Ann and Susan. I can picture where this event takes place - I drive past it every day on my way to and from work - even though there is no fruit and veg store there, and even though I have never seen a bag lady fossicking there either. But there is a bin there.
Thank you both for reading and commenting and your starry support.
Great story. Enjoyed this piece, Matt. Good use of details. Yes.
Thank you Sam - I always appreciate you reading.