Where hearts have no conquerors

good πάθος here, i like it. like the late tolstoy. you can't know this but the piece eerily fits what i'm writing now - i take this as a gift from the gods.

Nice! Lena, I like this very much. There is a poetic quality to it that seems to work really well.

"Let's just talk and let our words be woven into a veil of tears."

"The burden is upon you, my abnormal friends, to revolt, against this: the one that never questioned itself, the only so freaking selfsure and the true dominance of the individual. "

Love this. It's so open and hopeful, in addition to being beautifully written.

We spend so much time and energy dividing ourselves into "camps" or "teams" of one kind or another. Think how much better things would be if we could just "lay down and tolerate."

Big fave.

Nice work, Lena! I agree with Kari—this has a poetic quality to it.

Thank you everyone :)! Hm, Tolstoi, poetic quality ... maybe I should write more like this. Always used to do poetry but I would like to invlude short fiction and non-fiction too.

Thanks Kim!

"... where greed is only a word without significance, hunger doesn't belong in a dictionary and money is only an archeological object." Love this - and yes, there's definitely a poetic quality to the piece that makes it so lovely. Well done! *

Thank you Pam :)!

Lena, this is so beautiful: "Let's just talk and let our words be woven into a veil of tears." -- * Q

Thanks Q! Something tells me I have to write more non-fiction :)

Hey, this is nice. I love the flow here... Glad I am now following you, Lena.

Same here Michelle, fond of your writing, and thank you!

There is so much wonderful about this piece. I found the first paragraph especially powerful. Glad I found your work *

Thanks Jen! * (will soon look for yours) *

this is quite wonderful! *

Interesting stuff!