Struggle for Life
7.53
Another morning ritual. Trying to fill the loose ends of time in the early morning is a task.
7.54
I've done about everything, too early to work and too late to go back to sleep.
7.55
Trying to avoid the nausea of life at all cost. My mind is a snakepit, filled with holes.
7.56
Trip, fall ... those damned memory traps.
7.57
A second of a glimpse is enough, the hole became my home for another lifetime of a minute, less than a minute?
7.58
No. A minute. But I should be happy, I know I should. This is one of the happiest periods in my whole life. I should be happy ...
7.59
I am happy
Another morning ritual. Trying to fill the loose ends of time in the early morning is a task.
7.54
I've done about everything, too early to work and too late to go back to sleep.
7.55
Trying to avoid the nausea of life at all cost. My mind is a snakepit, filled with holes.
7.56
Trip, fall ... those damned memory traps.
7.57
A second of a glimpse is enough, the hole became my home for another lifetime of a minute, less than a minute?
7.58
No. A minute. But I should be happy, I know I should. This is one of the happiest periods in my whole life. I should be happy ...
7.59
I am happy
Nicely done. Interesting form.
Nice meditation.
Insightful thought progression. That's what it takes, the power of a positive thought, the will to life, happiness is attitude, we choose it.
I like your metaphors.
7.55 my favorite.
Thanks Sam! Thanks Allie!
Thanks J. in a way I agree but it's damn hard to get that attitude changed once you have it ;).
Thanks Bill, fond of your writing too ... love your compact style.
I wanted to learn more from 7-55. Found form interesting but content too vague. 7-55 is most and least telling and/ or most telling.
Thanks for reading Bobbi! I kept the content intentionally vague, not only because the form benefits from it but also because it's meant to project the way a mind can work in some cases and also how it can do magic.
I like the way you think.