The decreasing apex
came up too fast.
You left paint and blood smeared on the wall
spiced with steel and savory
super-high-traction tire compound
both which seem to have limits.
Folly lurks in surpassing one's self
while suffused with a sense of immortality.
Good news though,
if you have such obsessions
your end will be quick.
Better to be a smear on the wall
than an ugly bundle of made-up bones
in an ill-advised open casket.
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Oh, I like this.
*I like it, too. Good poetry, this.
A man must know his limitations. *
Love this. Especially the ending.
Thanks all - for your encouragement. I would have sent you all individual Thnx but I couldn't figure out how (must be a prob. with my system...
Great last stanza, Larry!