by Kirsty Logan
She will sit
and she will stitch.
Penelope sewed for love; those unnamed girls — sister
of swans, spinner of straw to gold — sewed for their lives.
Sold into tangles made by mothers, the endless edge
of the coin between women. If girls have keys for fingers
then locks cannot hold them. Now Ariadne has her thread,
golden as porridge, and she too must sew. For love, for life,
to be another man's wife, she forces fistfuls of gold
into keyholes. The desertion of man makes a hero, but
mothers must build their homes from birth-red dirt and branches
sap-bled. A thousand pomegranate seeds will make a fireplace.
A bull made of gowns, a beast stitched from slippers: this is the task
that will make a woman a myth.
Now she will sit
and she will stitch
because that is what girls must do.
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NaPoWriMo, Day 6.
I like the mythic references, Kirsty. Good piece.
Love this. I've never been able to fully articulate why I like a poem...I admire poets like yourself any many others here, but sometimes I just know I love a poem. I love this one. I know the repetition from first stanza to last has something to do with it...hahaha...wish I could explain better.
How about I try this: These things took my breath:
"the endless edge of coin between women"
AND
"mothers must build their homes from birth-red dirt"
AND
"this is the task/that will make a woman a myth."
Love it. Plain and simple.
'that is what girls must do.'
This made me uneasy. 'birth red dirt.'
beautiful but cruel. I came away sad.