Feb 5
by Kait Mauro
Cooking together is one of my new favorite things about being married to each other. He peels the garlic while I stir the lentils; he chops the cilantro while I peel kale leaf from stem. Also, the rings. Also, no one is going anywhere.
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Author's Note
Still plugging away at my February series/project
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"Also, no one is going anywhere." That blessed anchor. Quick and to the heart.
Amen, Matthew. I need it. <3
Mathew, is there anything you don't fav? Apart from my stuff that is.
Enjoying the series.
So beautiful, Kait.
Nice flash, love the last line. *
Suggestion: "to each other" seems superfluous. Consider cutting.
And, maybe the second "Also" could go? The rings imply they're not going anywhere.
"Also, the rings. No one is going anywhere."
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