Slept on a chair last night in the Springfield, Mass., bus terminal. It was March, and a dude in shorts asked: "Yo, you smoke trees?" I said, "Sure. Who doesn't?" He said, "You buyin'?" I said, "Nope, I'm going out of the country." He smiled and said, "Alright." He started to walk away and I said, "Here," and handed him thirty dollars. He grinned and a new spring sprung up in his step.
Hours later my bus was there. I was heading to Boston, then getting picked up by my people and driven to Newark. I was backtracking to move forward. From Newark, I was flying to Mexico City. From there, I didn't know where I'd be next. All I knew was, I was intensely allergic to the airport in Mexico City. I'd had a sneezing fit each of the past two times they'd sent me. Years before, in my twenties, I wasn't allergic at all. I don't know what had changed in the decade and a half since.
On the bus to Boston, there was no one. Just me, the driver, and a small smattering of passengers I couldn't see in the seats behind me. It was 3 a.m. Not much reason for anyone to be on that bus at that time.
My people picked me up at South Station in Boston at 5 a.m. as they said they would. My people was just this guy Joel in a black town car. I knew him from before, and I knew he wouldn't say too much on the drive to Newark. He worked for my uncle, who I included in my people.
Joel said, "Hello again," and took my bag, then inspected it, then threw it in the trunk. "Hi, thanks," I said, before he did that.
Joel was dressed casually today in blue slacks and a white polo shirt. Before, he was in a suit.
I was in jeans and sandals, and a white button down, if you must know. Neither of us were dressed for March. Both of us would wind up in Mexico City eventually.
On the drive to Newark, I slept. Joel drove in silence with no radio. That was his fashion.
We reached the Newark airport at 9:30 a.m. I was to travel on a freight flight. We drove down a side road that led to where FedEx and UPS cargo was loaded. Joel stopped just outside one of the loading areas. He got out of the car. Then I got out.
"You fucked my sister," he said, as he pulled my bag from his trunk. "So what?" I answered. He smiled and handed me my bag. "She misses you," he answered, smiling, still. I shook my head.
Simple. Pars ending on deadpan downbeats. Coupla little tricks like the multiple meanings of 'still' at the end.
I like this. Nice voice established at the start, and a couple of good characters portrayed in the narrator and Joel. Obviously more to come since it’s labeled as “Pt. 1”?
Nice slice of the road warrior life, Joel. Well done.
Very nicely told. Love the ending here, and the voice throughout is strong. Nice.
Wow! Thanks for all the comments and favs. I was going to delete this story last night. I wasn't too sure about it. I love this site. Everybody here is fantastic. I'll have to post part 2 soon.