When we are so old
that I no longer talk about sex
as fire but water,
forgetting our once ferocious midnight appetites
and settling solidly on morning or afternoon delights-
When I suggest we roll about in the expansive sea
of a bathtub tide
and surf naked only in the warmth
of candlelight or summer-
When that time comes and we come,
I'll still want the blinds open
and the lights on,
to see the papier-mache of our flesh
fighting death away to the century mark,
even if you only want to live until
a ripe eighty-two.
Looking into your eyes I'll still see you, all of thirty seven,
and remember the lovers we each had to
beat away with a look or a stick.
Love your optimism!
Well-written, nice images, nice combinations *
A true love poem. Resolute, absolute perfection!
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Well done.
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Really enjoyed this.