Flickers
by Hazem Tagiuri
Saturday at Portobello market.
Wind whittles leaves from the trees;
casts shop signs into windows,
turning glass to shimmering fishscale.
We speak of the cold in our bones,
of swaddled layers worn in vain.
We watch the ever-moving crowd,
punters wary of lingering too long.
Here, people must kindle hope,
sparked by flickers of bright life.
I stay with them, in the midst of it all,
until the sun is snuffed out from the sky.
Autumn melancholy in every line. Really liked this poem.
Particularly like the image of glass into fishscale!
"Wind whittles leaves from the trees"
Whittles? Whittles! Oh , of course!
This is the most perfect verb use I have seen in so long.
Thanks Carol, and Jane. Lovely comments.
Jane, I must admit I'm partial to odd verbs!
Very creative imagery. *
Thanks Jake!
I love this. The metaphors are excellent.