Giacometti reclines on the couch. He smokes my last cigarette and points to an object behind me, a spare structure of thin uprights and horizontal beams in which there is something like a flying bird, the backbone of an animal, a female figure, and a hollowed out spatulate shape with a ball in front of it. He tells me that only a few things had happened in his life but some of them he had felt deeply.
“I don't know by what means my father came to terms with his grief,” he says. “His sadness was of the kind that is patient but without hope.”
My girlfriend enters the room. She crosses herself and kisses me shyly on the cheek. Then sits at Giacometti's feet. His shoes are caked with mud. She plays absently with the mud, scraping it from his shoes with her long unpainted fingernail. Giacometti ignores her, and keeps speaking.
“The artist conserves a splinter of ice in the heart,” he says. “After I left my village of Borgonova in Switzerland I was always a tourist, wherever I was.”
Giacometti reaches down to play with Maura's hair. In a corner of the dark room stands a statue of Maura. Her body is elongated, thin as a nail and as big as a cigarette pack. When Maura asked why he had done this he had said nothing, but shrugged his slender shoulders. To me, later, he had said, “When I look at a woman the longer I look the thinner they become. I work by paring away what is not essential, work until one touch more and things vanish. But do you love her, this Catholic girl?” I nodded my head, yes. “Very much," I said. Giacometti sighed. “I have no thoughts on this,” he said. “All my thoughts are in the clay.”
It was spring break in Cambridge. We had traveled two days and two nights to be with him in his studio. There were letters of introduction, which he ripped up and burned in his furnace. Yet when he had answered the door he acted as though he knew us and had been expecting us for some time. Later he told us it was as if we had always been there.
“The artist must be taken in by his own tricks,” Giacometti says. “He must begin by pleasing himself. This is essential. His mouth must be the first that drops open in surprise.”
When he says this Maura reaches out her mud streaked fingers and caresses his cheek. She throws open the wide window. In the gloaming, a yawning face appears in the clouds. The sky is painted with a bruised lead and sepia tone that will afterwards haunt me, as too this room, with its objects alive and dead at the same time.
Maura is in his lap. She kisses him, repeatedly, but he makes no acknowledgement of her urgent Irish kisses. He only takes her hand and wipes away the mud.
Now even the farthest windows have gone dark. And it appears that the dark needs us, wants us for itself. We want to lie with Giacometti in his unmade bed on the floor in his studio.
The week before he died I confessed to Maura that I didn't think I could stand it without him. And she said to me, “I've lived with death my whole life. And I know that the people we love we carry with us, always. They are part of us.”
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i wanted to imagine an irish= italian=swiss=american coming together, with the writer william maxwell the medium for this dream.
also, i wanted to spend time with giacometti, and still do--
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Interesting that Giaco says all but two of the dialogues. So he is balanced between the two, and that's a nice contrast. You get the artist's enigmatic speech patterns across well. The sense of restraint with this piece was also wise of you.
wonderful. "all my thoughts are in the clay", "the artist conserves a splinter or ice in the heart"-is that percesepe or actual giacometti? i want to spend time with him, too, now. this piece works on many levels and is good on all of them. it even makes me see giacometti in a different light. i've just written a piece on meeting john cage. we must be connected somehow. perhaps it's the age. "urgent irish kisses": this beautifully saved the day for the Paddy Whacker. and at the end, this piece, which is also funny and surreal, takes a marvelous turn into the thicket of existence and heartfelt sentiment. star!
Great economy, David, working on many levels. I thought it an excellent portrait of idol worship, when once a group of people place another on a pedestal, disciples are sure to follow. They give over their power, and the idol becomes their drug. It’s perfect that he ignores her kisses and instead wipes her fingers. As with any egomaniac (as most great artists are) he is more concerned with building the image than any other form of gratification. Nice.
Great piece, Gary. A mantra: "The artist must be taken in by his own tricks". I like this work. Wonderful ending here.
thank you, sam, derek, eamon & finn--
i have always loved giacometti's work, but was unable to say how or why--
perhaps it was easier for me to allow these two college students to express what the heart feels, and to do it slant (as emily says).--
the dialogue is taken from multiple sources, including me, but filtered through the voice of william maxwell, both from his fiction and in accounts of him by his writer friends. the description of giacometti's "the palace at 4 am" is from maxwell's novel, so long, see you tomorrow, an amazing book, if you have not read--
the last words are maxwell's, as reported by a friend.
Gary, wow again. This had a lot of potential to come across as naive allegory, but you walk that line without crossing it. You don't even get near it, really. Beautifully done, powerfully written. I, too, want to sip espresso with Giacometti. May I?
I could be biased here, imagining my little Giacomo growing up to be so awesomely refined and cool.
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yes, you may.
Studying the way you've managed to inject the sadness into the tone so beautifully that it hangs there through the movement. So nice.
ah, susan--thank you for reading & commenting. there is a sadness here, yes--it seems to touch everything i write, almost--of late. maybe always.
This almost seems a rendering of the character of Giacometti as inferred from his work, astutely I think. There's a powerful sense of ennui like an undertow that seems to make, in the piece, action, even speech so effortful.
thanks, david--
ennui--yes, yes
he is resined, this fictive g--
Scary, this splinter of ice in the heart. It might even be true, and that makes it double scary, especially since folks like the narrator are then yearningly affected, as though the splinter had become a dagger facing outward. I like the almost consoling ending, although from what feel I get for the narrator, he's not likely to be convinced but probably thinks "easy for you to say."
thank you, beade--
Gary, I like the quite contemplative tone, the details of the images you build up.
thank, ajay--
i am trying to figure where to send this one out to--
is a diff story, ya know--
all best,
gary
this is amazing. i was afraid to read it for certain specific reasons i won't elaborate on... you know-- artist vs artist
now i have to put this one out of my head
susan,
your comment intrigues me--can you say more? why afraid, why artist v artist, and etc?
J&D
ah---ok
duh
i am now back at work after working (elsewhere) all morning--