by Gary Hardaway
Good language economics here. I like.
Love this, especially the last stanza/image. *
I think that the form fits the piece.*
Clear and slim and provocative. *
You capture the moment perfectly with your expert imagery. The reader "hears" the sound of silence. This is brilliant, in my opinion. A+ / *.
Economic and evocative.*
Thank you, Sam, Beate, Amanda,John, Jake,and Gary for listening and commenting.