Gymnopedies
Does sound shape silence
or silence shape sound?
Here, the shape of each
is perfect as Satie's paired hands
poised before they strike or stroke
the keys.
or silence shape sound?
Here, the shape of each
is perfect as Satie's paired hands
poised before they strike or stroke
the keys.
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Good language economics here. I like.
Love this, especially the last stanza/image. *
I think that the form fits the piece.*
Clear and slim and provocative. *
You capture the moment perfectly with your expert imagery. The reader "hears" the sound of silence. This is brilliant, in my opinion. A+ / *.
Economic and evocative.*
Thank you, Sam, Beate, Amanda,John, Jake,and Gary for listening and commenting.