Ode To The Lord's Heavenly Men
He made them as they are
Identical
Heaven forbid
Women have to suffer
For what the Lord did
Or
Is this just a little fib
That men blame on poor God?
How about it guys?
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Just joking around guys!
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Good joke. Maybe change "fib" to "rib." haha
thanks for that suggestion Matt, yeah, god did forget 1 rib did'nt he?
Really funny poem with a nice sharp satirical edge!
Funny Estelle-
Enjoyed this-
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thanks for reading this and getting a laugh, we sure need laughs sometime.
thank you Susan, much appreciated.